okay well i see this a very distracting piece. and confusing, yet its very challenging for the eyes , the contrast between the yellow and the black and the cropped out parts make my eyes linger and unable to target a spot where it could stop and actually see whats goin on .
i donno but i don really feel comfortable looking at it. despite the concept beyond it, i think its composition is very distracting.
and thats my openion afterall